by Agrini Bhattacharya
When Radhika’s eldest brother got married, she was very upset. She had two more elder brothers and an elder sister. She was everybody’s pet and did not want any strangers in the house.
Plus she didn’t want Uday to get married. She thought that he would not pay attention to her if he got married. And she had seen Uday give that horrible Sarita a nice big present. She envied her.
She was very unhappy.
When all the ceremonies were done, she went into her bedroom and locked it. Lying awake, she kept on thinking about how to take revenge on her bhabhi (sister-in-law). She started weeping.
Ma was passing by her room. She went in and asked her what the matter was. Radhika told her everything. But before Ma could say anything, Baba called Ma because some guests are asking for her. She kissed Radhika on her forehead and went away.
Radhika kept on thinking and ultimately fell asleep. In the morning she refused to come down to breakfast. At the table, Uday asked Ma “Where is Radhika? Still sleeping?”
“No. She is angry with you. She says that you have forgotten her and will now not play with her.”
Uday went up to her bedroom. She was reading a book.
Uday said “Are you upset?”
Radhika nodded. “Why?” asked Uday. She told him the reason.
Uday said “I will play with only you. Sarita is so much older, and she doesn’t even know how to play ‘tag’. Happy?”
At that moment Sarita came in. She sat down and said sorry. She gave Radhika a big gift. Now Radhika was happy.
But two months later another new bride…………….
Parsa Venkateshwar Rao Jr
Jul 06, 2011 @ 08:11:04
This is something charming and also deeply writerly. She has a natural talent for ending on the right note, brevity and simplicity!
Ashutosh Kumar
Jul 06, 2011 @ 10:00:48
Really nice, reminds me of my elder cousin, who was upset when my father (her mama) got married to my mom,,,and was even upset more when i was born. Ashutosh
agrini
Jul 06, 2011 @ 14:58:59
thanks for your comments. with so many comments pouring, my ‘comment box’ will be full! will meet u on another picnic.
luv
the great author………..[cheeni]
PARUL TAMBE
Oct 19, 2011 @ 15:03:50
hiiiiii agrini i am your friend PARUL IN THE SOCIETY .
THE STORY IS VERY VERY GOOD I REALLY LIKED IT .
LOVE
PARUL THE BEST
sindhu
Jul 06, 2011 @ 10:04:38
dear cheeni, i wonder at you for such sensitive writing. i had similar feelings when my younger sister – your mausi – was born. I felt totally neglected and refused to come back home from my nani’s place for weeks. My fear was that with a new bundle of joy, mom and dad would forget me!!! Mom
vivek seal
Jul 06, 2011 @ 10:18:07
Excellent writing, keep it up, cheers
Mayank Aggarwal
Jul 06, 2011 @ 11:44:33
Agrini, the simplicity with which u have approached the complex n emotional subject really deserves a big applaud …. i could totally relate to it … feel the emotion ….. loved it very much … u shud actually keep it up …. listen to ur thoughts and keep pouring out your thoughts ……
agrini
Jul 06, 2011 @ 15:00:05
thank you. hope to meet you soon…..
Cheeni
Madhavi
Jul 07, 2011 @ 12:23:32
Hi Agrini,
Really impressed with your story-telling ability !
To write with such brevity yet total clarity is a great thing to master – so Congrats…
The best part’s the ending – you surely have a flair for suspense :-)…
Keep writing and show us more of your light, sensitive touch.
cheers
Madhavi
Ritu
Jul 08, 2011 @ 05:29:00
Loved reading it Agrini! Please write more……Cheers Ritu
Sumita
Jul 08, 2011 @ 06:02:48
Totally impressed, sugar girl! You are a natural story teller…..touched by your poignant story. God Bless……..Sumita
Jethu
Jul 14, 2011 @ 09:06:31
We extend our best wishes with all our appreciation for the zeal you have shown in story writing. Keep it up…Very articulate, very contemporary and very meaningful. I will publish this story in our Durga Puja Journal in coming months.
Jethu, Jethi & Aditya…
KITU PRINCE
Jul 23, 2011 @ 11:18:27
Totally impressed, sugar girl! You are a natural story teller…..touched by your poignant story. God Bless……..KITU PRINCE .
PARUL
Sep 12, 2012 @ 15:03:06
girl you have the talent in your self so all the best
best of luck
PARUL TAMBE
sinjain@gmail.com
Sep 13, 2012 @ 08:02:44
Hi, have been trying to reach you guys for quite some time as my daughter Agrini wanted to send another story. Where shall I mail this new story?
Sindhu Bhattacharya, Mother
Sent on my BlackBerry® from Vodafone
parulg0
Sep 13, 2012 @ 11:15:19
Dear Sindhu,
We’d love to feature another of Agrini’s beautiful stories on the site. Please mail the story to wordsnmore@gmail.com.
regards,
The team of Words and More (Kids).
sindhu bhattacharya
Sep 13, 2012 @ 11:26:02
just mailed a story, called The Tree Climbing” by Agrini. rgds sindhu