My Sweet Mom

by Shivalika Rupani

Imagine if Mothers were not there:
Who would take care?
Who would love us;
Who would stop us from making a fuss?
Who would stop us from being bad;
Who would never make us sad?
Who would give us a cuddle;
Who would give us a love bundle?
Who would be there with us when we are alone;
Who would save us from a cyclone?
Who would make us understand;
Who would allow us to play with the sand?
Who would allow us to go on the com:
Only our sweet and loving mom!
Shivalika Rupani is 9 years old and studies in class IV at Billabong High School, Mumbai, India. She loves to draw, paint, eat Maggi and write.

18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. nivs khemka
    Jul 13, 2011 @ 07:45:53

    its absolutely TRUE and beautiful Shivi … as beautiful as you ;-))


  2. Lopa Sheth
    Jul 13, 2011 @ 11:19:22

    Well Done Shivi !!!!!!!!!!! U really make us n ur mom feel proud abt u!!! God Bless You Angel !!!


  3. Sonal Gupta
    Jul 13, 2011 @ 22:16:55

    So sweet


  4. Devi
    Jul 14, 2011 @ 04:19:21

    wow shivalika. you must be the most lovely daughter


  5. Vinita Bahl
    Jul 14, 2011 @ 05:19:02

    Beautiful Shivi……………well done baccha! So proud of you!


  6. Shrihari V. Choudhary
    Jul 23, 2011 @ 06:43:38

    It is very good poem.


  7. kavita
    Jul 23, 2011 @ 13:28:30

    i like ur article…


  8. aastharana
    Jul 24, 2011 @ 12:39:13

    Its nice to talk about sweet mom always because they are` really sweet always .


  9. gauri jain
    Jul 31, 2011 @ 13:12:47

    gauri jain
    its realy cute


  10. shally sharma
    Jul 31, 2011 @ 16:49:55


    My father was a quiet man,

    His nature was calm and mild.

    My father was a gentle man,

    Who always wore a smile.

    My father was a placid man,

    Who never made a row.

    A quiet man… oh, how I wish,

    He could be with me now.

    My father was a special man,

    Esteemed in his business life.

    My father excelled in commerce,

    But wasn’t valued by his wife.

    My father didn’t worry though,

    He always wore a smile.

    A quiet man, a loving man,

    He lived too short a while.


  11. sanchiamehra
    Aug 07, 2011 @ 05:14:56

    shivalika its is very nice!!…… i loved it


  12. sanchiamehra
    Aug 09, 2011 @ 12:35:39

    very nice and true!!


  13. Axa
    Oct 28, 2012 @ 07:00:17

    Really woderful and
    I appreciate u shivi


  14. radha garg
    Apr 03, 2013 @ 15:24:47

    hi shivi mujhe ye poem itni achhi lagi ki maine apni daughter ko competition ke liye yahi poem choose kar ke di hai.


  15. DHRITI. Suri
    Jun 18, 2013 @ 07:53:43



  16. Yarishiya Akham
    Sep 19, 2014 @ 05:10:34


    Mother’s bosom is the safest in the world,
    With a touch of her hands
    all the pains gone.
    In my life
    i will not be able to repay
    what you have done for me.


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